| Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 | |
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zeru The Wizards
Posts : 4926 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:11 am | |
| =a large steel bar flie through the air hitting the engiines damaging them, and as jack starts to leave i show up and pull tar out of the way behind a wall=
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Draco The Wizards
Posts : 7916 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:15 am | |
| Hope-You can only wish for it all to end
Sarge-It wont end, Sir.
(He turns to face them) (Within)
Now is not the time
(He turns back to Ash) (He takes her hand) | |
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Xazhi The Longterm Poster
Posts : 3243 Join date : 2011-06-03
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:16 am | |
| Jack- What's the status on that AI? Adam- Nearly done sir...Got it! - Code:
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/Sunreion Online/
Running Ship-wide status scans... /Complete/
Problems found: Engines
Engine Status: 87%
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/Beginning Damagre Repairs/
Jack- Just take off. I am sick of this planet already... =The ship fires up and starts to take off= | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:18 am | |
| =She continues watching the city holding Draco's hand, thinking back to the moment she was drugged= What was that stuff... I still feel so strange... What could it be..?
=She tucks her hair behind her ear, looking at Draco her voice in a gentle tone= Draco..? You didn't answer my question.. Are you okay? |
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Sunrieon The Wizards
Posts : 4971 Join date : 2011-06-07 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:18 am | |
| =pulls out some stickies and throws them at the ship=
enjoy your landing asshole! | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:18 am | |
| =I see men with weapons just outside the glass door and I go deep into the hotel as they chase after me= |
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Draco The Wizards
Posts : 7916 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:19 am | |
| (He smiles at her) @Ash Yeah. Im okay. Are you alright? | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:23 am | |
| =I hide in an unoccupied room and wait for them to bypass me and I remember that Ash and Draco are on the roof=
Hate to pop in unannounced...
=I find my way up to the roof stairs with out being detected= |
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Xazhi The Longterm Poster
Posts : 3243 Join date : 2011-06-03
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:24 am | |
| =The ship rocks as a few grenades explode on the hull. The ship tips over a bit in-air and falls slightly back towards the ground, nearly slamming head-on into the place where the Spartans ducked for cover. The ship gets back on track. Jack heads down and stands on the open landing ramp, firing his new Rifle at the Spartans=
Sunreion- Full power coming back online. Sheilds on at 67%.
Jack- Good, Sun. Take us out of here.
=The ship flies higher and higher. Jack closes the ramp and heads back to the central room of the main Deck= | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:24 am | |
| =She smiles= Yeah I'm fine... Really don't worry about me...
=She thinks about the moment she talked to Hope= Hope seemed so calm... Wise even.. But who are they... Can I ask..? |
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Sunrieon The Wizards
Posts : 4971 Join date : 2011-06-07 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:25 am | |
| Shit he got away! God Dammit!
=he fires madly at the engines as it flies away= | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:26 am | |
| =I barge through the door leading to the roof and quickly shut it=
=I turn to Ash and Draco=
Umm.. we uhh..
=I take my helmet off and wipe the sweat off my face=
We have a little problem. |
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zeru The Wizards
Posts : 4926 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:26 am | |
| elyon there is a ship leaving the planet i want you to cripple it and force it to land
elyon: understood
=the trophaeum fires several shots from the smaller, anti-fighter weaponry at the ship hitting it head on= | |
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Sunrieon The Wizards
Posts : 4971 Join date : 2011-06-07 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:27 am | |
| Scythe:
=I see Snow run by=
Woah! what's the Rush! | |
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Draco The Wizards
Posts : 7916 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:28 am | |
| (Calmly) (A little anger comes out of his voice) @Snow What. Now | |
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Xazhi The Longterm Poster
Posts : 3243 Join date : 2011-06-03
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:33 am | |
| =The ship is struck be several shots and quickly falls to the planet below= | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:35 am | |
| =I put my helmet back on and keep tight to the door=
You aren't going to like it.. Those Anti-UNSC people are on to us..
=I prepare for the worst= |
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Draco The Wizards
Posts : 7916 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:37 am | |
| (He sighs) @Snow We know. Now please. Go. | |
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Sunrieon The Wizards
Posts : 4971 Join date : 2011-06-07 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:37 am | |
| Scythe:
=I walk down the hall noticing a bunch of men run past me=
Interesting... | |
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Xazhi The Longterm Poster
Posts : 3243 Join date : 2011-06-03
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:39 am | |
| =As the ship falls from the atmosphere, Adam fights with the controls to keep it up=
Jack- We need to get out of here! Make the jump to slipspace!
Adam- No can do, sir! A slipspace jump would likely shred the ship into a million peices! We need to try to keep it up and pray to god we have a good enough landing to survive! | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:39 am | |
| =I put my hands at chest level=
No, no, no, I am not going back down there.. |
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Sunrieon The Wizards
Posts : 4971 Join date : 2011-06-07 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:40 am | |
| Scythe:
=I ignore the men and head for the roof=
Let's see how everyone is doing... | |
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Xazhi The Longterm Poster
Posts : 3243 Join date : 2011-06-03
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:41 am | |
| =The ship falls out of the sky on the oposite end of a mountain from the ship that struck it. Adam continues fighting the controls, and Sunrieon continues doing all he can to keep the ship up=
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Draco The Wizards
Posts : 7916 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:43 am | |
| (He turns around) (Sitting down) (He faces Snow) (Silent) | |
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zeru The Wizards
Posts : 4926 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:43 am | |
| - Jack wrote:
- =As the ship falls from the atmosphere, Adam fights with the controls to keep it up=
Jack- We need to get out of here! Make the jump to slipspace!
Adam- No can do, sir! A slipspace jump would likely shred the ship into a million peices! We need to try to keep it up and pray to god we have a good enough landing to survive! =as the ship falls zeru urgently comms elyon= elyone engage gravity lift and catch the shipelyon roger=the gravity lift catches the ship in the nick of time= | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:44 am | |
| =I slide down the door, still keeping it closed=
=I see Draco looking at me=
What..? |
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Sunrieon The Wizards
Posts : 4971 Join date : 2011-06-07 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:45 am | |
| Tar-Tun:
=he punches zeru in the head=
Why are you helping them you Idiot!? | |
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Draco The Wizards
Posts : 7916 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:46 am | |
| (His eyes glaze over) (Looking through Snow) (Unblinking) (Silent) | |
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Xazhi The Longterm Poster
Posts : 3243 Join date : 2011-06-03
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:47 am | |
| Adam- Sir, the ship is trying to catch us in its Grav beam!
Jack- Well that doesent typically work through mountains, does it???
=The ship just barely clips a ledge of another cliff before slammig into a lake. The ship half-floats on the water. Jack is knocked unconcious as he is thrown forward from the impact onto a steel bar that was knocked out of the wall during the attack. The bar impales his stomach and his vision goes hazy. He blacks out. The others on board are killed on impact with the water. The ship slowly sinks as water seeps in through a small 1.5inch hole in the lower deck=
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Sunrieon The Wizards
Posts : 4971 Join date : 2011-06-07 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:49 am | |
| Scythe:
=I walk up to the roof, for some reason not being able to open the door=
Hey let me out! | |
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zeru The Wizards
Posts : 4926 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:50 am | |
| =takes the punch and gets up and rushes to a transport and heads to the ship=
hello? can anyone hear me | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:52 am | |
| =I glance over to Draco=
You.. you want me to leave?
=I point to the closed door just behind me= |
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Sunrieon The Wizards
Posts : 4971 Join date : 2011-06-07 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:53 am | |
| Scythe:
=I hit the door=
Hey please let me out! | |
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Draco The Wizards
Posts : 7916 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:53 am | |
| (His eyes shift and de-glaze) (He looks up at Ash) (In his head) There is one thing I want to ask you. But I am unsure what you will say | |
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Xazhi The Longterm Poster
Posts : 3243 Join date : 2011-06-03
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:57 am | |
| =As his vision blurs, he hears some static on the comms. He remembers that the only entrance to the ship is on the bottem, which is not underwater. The cockpit goes under, and water seeps around Jack's feet=
Jack- Oh fuck...!
=He grasps his chest and tries to reach into his pocket, but his pocket is pinned against the wall=
Jack- Shit.........
=His chest starts pounding and he nearly throws up before blacking out=
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 12:59 am | |
| What is that?
=I follow his eyes to Ash, knowing what he might ask=
=I hear knocking at the door, but ignore it= |
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Sunrieon The Wizards
Posts : 4971 Join date : 2011-06-07 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 01:00 am | |
| c'mon guys let me out! don't make me cut this door open too! | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 01:01 am | |
| Shut up, rebel!
=I continue to wait for Draco's question= |
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zeru The Wizards
Posts : 4926 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 01:02 am | |
| =has the transport hover right above the water, jettisones his armor and dives in through the entry ramp making his way to the bridge= | |
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Sunrieon The Wizards
Posts : 4971 Join date : 2011-06-07 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 01:07 am | |
| Rebel!?
=I cut a small rectangle in the door with my scythe=
let me in snow c'mon!
=I put my arm through the hole and try to hit Snow=
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 01:08 am | |
| =I see the man=
Oh.. how do you know my name?
=I open the door and quickly let him and and close the door again=
=I put the rectangle piece back into the door= |
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Sunrieon The Wizards
Posts : 4971 Join date : 2011-06-07 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 01:10 am | |
| Ash told me your name, and you haven't noticed me call you your name before?
.........
=I sit=
Do you even know my name? | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 01:12 am | |
| No, I don't really care right now.
=I try to listen for any movement through the door= |
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Xazhi The Longterm Poster
Posts : 3243 Join date : 2011-06-03
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 01:14 am | |
| =The water now up to his waist=
Jack- Wha tthe fuck...I cant see...i cant move...i cant hear...i cant speak...oh, fuck!
=His chest continues pounding. He keeps trying to reach into his pocket but he cant reach it. He falls limp, blood pouring out of his stomach= | |
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Sunrieon The Wizards
Posts : 4971 Join date : 2011-06-07 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 01:15 am | |
| =I give him an evil look through my helmet=
Don't care!? It's kinda important to know someone's name! | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 01:17 am | |
| Most likely, I won't be around you for long.
=I turn back to Draco=
Because you might be dead. |
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Xazhi The Longterm Poster
Posts : 3243 Join date : 2011-06-03
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 01:17 am | |
| =He wakes up, barely. He can see kinda. He sees the blood pour out of him. He sees the pipe sticking through him. He takes his Energy Knife and uses the broad side to brun the wound closed. He puts his knife back and continues reaching into his pocket, but he just cant do it. He blacks out again= | |
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Sunrieon The Wizards
Posts : 4971 Join date : 2011-06-07 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 01:19 am | |
| =I laugh and twirl my scythe above my head=
or maybe the other way around!
=I slam my scythe down=
The names Scythe. | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 01:20 am | |
| =I look at his weapon=
Really? I don't intend on dying. |
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Sunrieon The Wizards
Posts : 4971 Join date : 2011-06-07 Age : 28
| Subject: Re: Chapter 5 Revelations of the Past Part 2 05/07/11, 01:23 am | |
| nor do i...
=I remove my helmet=
how about that poker game we never had? | |
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