| A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. | |
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Valor The Newly Not New Guy
Posts : 217 Join date : 2011-08-16 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 02:51 am | |
| (Markov)
=I hear voices, but they sound far away=
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Xazhi The Longterm Poster
Posts : 3243 Join date : 2011-06-03
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 02:51 am | |
| =Shield's vision blurrs and he passes out due to some injury he didnt notice=
(Give me a second here, im waiting on something) | |
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
Posts : 13169 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 02:52 am | |
| =i wake up, and get untangled from the harness. I'm dizzy, and my shaking is worse than usual= Da fuck...?
=i try to stand, but have to lean against the wall of the Pelican= Just happened? | |
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Draco The Wizards
Posts : 7916 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 02:52 am | |
| =I look to one of Echo's members=
We were hit.
=I sigh=
Great, Let's check everyone. See if they.
=A sudden flash goes through my body=
Ah... See if they are alright.
=I let out a sigh of pain again and begin to move outside= | |
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
Posts : 13169 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 02:55 am | |
| =i groan= Oh, great, the one time I didn't want an explosion...
=i look around= You okay, Hawk?
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The Meta The Longterm Poster
Posts : 2930 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 32
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 02:57 am | |
| - Dakotah wrote:
- =I look to one of Echo's members=
We were hit.
=I sigh=
Great, Let's check everyone. See if they.
=A sudden flash goes through my body=
Ah... See if they are alright.
=I let out a sigh of pain again and begin to move outside= =I push a piece of the Pelican out of my way as I stumble away from the wreckage= Jesus frickin Christ, this situation is FUBAR...Aye, sir. | |
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Dewsaur The Active Poster
Posts : 1054 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 33
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 02:57 am | |
| Ah shit that hurt. Why is ground so hard..and was that a tree. The inside of my helmet was dark...seems my systems had to reboot.. I sit there waiting until a faint light appears on screen.
There we go.
Soon my screen lights up.
Damn it's bright.
The images are a little fuzzy but I can make out the details. I forcefully stand up despite my broken leg.
Aaagg!
Effing biofoam..damn that smarts. Well at least I can limp to the crash site. I try to find a high place to search for the pelican but it seems that wouldn't be needed. Right by my crash site there is a big crater in the ground showing me the way to the pelican. It was in shambles, and on fire. God damn rocket...I try to comm Shroud but it seems that my communtication unit was damaged. I started trotting to the crash, limp by limp. | |
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Draco The Wizards
Posts : 7916 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 02:58 am | |
| =I look around as I exit the wreckage= =I place the V.I.P. down near a rock=
=I comm Mimir=
Mimir! We've been hit behind enemy lines We need immediate.
=Another flash=
Extraction.
=I hobble around to the front. Almost falling= | |
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
Posts : 13169 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:01 am | |
| =I see my shotgun, up near the front past Shield. I stumble over there, checking on him on the way. He's unconscious, but otherwise okay. I pick up my shotgun and see Sparrow out the front of the Pelican. I climb out the window and make my way over to her= Sparrow, ma'am. You awake? | |
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N The Longterm Poster
Posts : 3589 Join date : 2011-05-13
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:01 am | |
| I never made to the Pelican. But I did see it crash. I stood there for a moment. | |
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zeru The Wizards
Posts : 4926 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:02 am | |
| =walks to the others and leans against a tree=
god dam them how bad is everyone hurt
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Skippy The Wizards
Posts : 4616 Join date : 2011-05-10
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:03 am | |
| I blink at the Spartan leaning over me. One of Echo Squads. Rubble I think. I try to speak but my body remains unresponsive | |
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
Posts : 13169 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:05 am | |
| =i see her blink= Well, at least you're awake. Let's get you out of your armor.
=i kneel down and get to work unclasping her armor= You okay? You hurt? | |
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N The Longterm Poster
Posts : 3589 Join date : 2011-05-13
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:05 am | |
| - Spoiler:
The Original post was:
"Roger that Sparrow." =to echo team=
"There's a clear LZ about thirty-five kilometers from here, we'll run there!"
I mark the LZ on their HUDs.
"On me, go!"
I walk, calmly, towards the wreckage. | |
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The Meta The Longterm Poster
Posts : 2930 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 32
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:07 am | |
| - Shelby wrote:
- I blink at the Spartan leaning over me. One of Echo Squads. Rubble I think. I try to speak but my body remains unresponsive
=I see Sparrow still not responding= =Over the Comm= Sir, we need a medic ASAP! Sparrow is unconcious and your the resident medic here. =I repeat it= Aegir sir, give us a hand over here. | |
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Draco The Wizards
Posts : 7916 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:08 am | |
| =I sit against a piece of rubble and assess my injuries=
Obvious trauma.. Dislocation present. Bones broken.
Perfect...
=I sigh= | |
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Valor The Newly Not New Guy
Posts : 217 Join date : 2011-08-16 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:08 am | |
| (Markov)
=I turn my head to see where my right arm would be, and I panic. I try to yell for help, but my voice was quiet= | |
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Xazhi The Longterm Poster
Posts : 3243 Join date : 2011-06-03
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:10 am | |
| =Shield looks up at the ceiling of the Pelican as he slowly regains consciousness. He goes to cough, but ends up with a great pain in his throat. He curses, but no sound comes of it. He sits up and realizes that the way he landed made the front of his helmet hit the bottom of his throat, which was now feeling like a garden hose with someone standing on it. He stands, and goes to pick up his rifle. He sends a text comm to Shroud= - Code:
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Do we have a medic with us? =He coughs heavily again, his throat in severe pain= | |
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Draco The Wizards
Posts : 7916 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:12 am | |
| =I recieve the message and stand= =I hobble back around to where the V.I.P. is=
=Comm to Shield=
I'm no medic. I don't know. | |
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zeru The Wizards
Posts : 4926 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:12 am | |
| cuts bruises my gunsl stopped me from having worse injuries but are totalled | |
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Skippy The Wizards
Posts : 4616 Join date : 2011-05-10
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:13 am | |
| As the armour comes off, my feeling returns to my body.
Go help the unconscious. I've got the rest of this.
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N The Longterm Poster
Posts : 3589 Join date : 2011-05-13
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:14 am | |
| - ShadowHunter wrote:
- Shelby wrote:
- I blink at the Spartan leaning over me. One of Echo Squads. Rubble I think. I try to speak but my body remains unresponsive
=I see Sparrow still not responding=
=Over the Comm=
Sir, we need a medic ASAP! Sparrow is unconcious and your the resident medic here.
=I repeat it=
Aegir sir, give us a hand over here. =comm= "Hold on! Something's jamming the signal, I can't get in touch with Mimir!" I begin running toward the crashed pelican. Hoping Sparrow isn't dead. | |
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Draco The Wizards
Posts : 7916 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:17 am | |
| =I check the V.I.P. again to make sure=
Good. Stay alive.
=I head back to the wreckage. Checking on everyone. I see Markov= =I hobble over=
Markov.
=I notice his arm missing=
Shit, listen, you're in bad shape. We're going to get evac here. You're going to be fine.
=I look to Shield=
Guard the V.I.P.! | |
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The Meta The Longterm Poster
Posts : 2930 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 32
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:17 am | |
| - Nic wrote:
- ShadowHunter wrote:
- Shelby wrote:
- I blink at the Spartan leaning over me. One of Echo Squads. Rubble I think. I try to speak but my body remains unresponsive
=I see Sparrow still not responding=
=Over the Comm=
Sir, we need a medic ASAP! Sparrow is unconcious and your the resident medic here.
=I repeat it=
Aegir sir, give us a hand over here. =comm=
"Hold on! Something's jamming the signal, I can't get in touch with Mimir!"
I begin running toward the crashed pelican. Hoping Sparrow isn't dead. I'm up, I'm up. =I check outboard comms and get static= =I take off my helmet, sigh, and put it back on= =I get on the intra squad comm= Guys...we got a problem. And its a big one. I was wrong...now its FUBAR All outgoing comms are jammed.
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Xazhi The Longterm Poster
Posts : 3243 Join date : 2011-06-03
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:20 am | |
| =He sends another text to Shroud= - Code:
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It will be done. =He grabs his rifle and walks out of the pelican over to Markov. He coughs intensely for a few moments, still in severe pain, before looking around for potential threats= | |
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
Posts : 13169 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:20 am | |
| =i nod= Yes, ma'am.
=i head back towards the Pelican, ducking into the cockpit again= Hey, who all's awake? | |
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Draco The Wizards
Posts : 7916 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:22 am | |
| =I lean against a wall=
Awake.
=I sigh as flashes of pain continue to go through=
What a drag | |
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N The Longterm Poster
Posts : 3589 Join date : 2011-05-13
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:23 am | |
| I neared the clearing, and stopped. Something was off. The pelican had been hit by a rocket, but there was no gunfire to pick off survivors. In fact, the forest was silent, despite the fact that the rain had picked up to the pace of a german waltz on methamphetamine or some other illegal stimulant.
And then the fog began rolling in.
I picked up my pace, jumping over things that had the potential to trip me.
I was close to the pelican now, I could see it. | |
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Skippy The Wizards
Posts : 4616 Join date : 2011-05-10
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:23 am | |
| I finish taking the rest of my armour off. The hardened gel layer had stopped me being injured too much but I was still very bruised and sore. I slowly get up, saddened my armour is gone | |
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N The Longterm Poster
Posts : 3589 Join date : 2011-05-13
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:24 am | |
| I get to the pelican, and look for Sparrow.
"Sparrow!" I shout, a hint of fear in my voice. | |
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
Posts : 13169 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:27 am | |
| =to Aegir= Out front, sir. | |
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Skippy The Wizards
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| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:27 am | |
| Aegir!!!
I shout back to him as I retrieve my weapons. I toss the grenade launcher away because the barrel is bent and holster my pistol. | |
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N The Longterm Poster
Posts : 3589 Join date : 2011-05-13
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:28 am | |
| - Shelby wrote:
- Aegir!!!
I shout back to him as I retrieve my weapons. I toss the grenade launcher away because the barrel is bent and holster my pistol. I jog to the front of the pelican. "Still need that trauma kit?" | |
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The Meta The Longterm Poster
Posts : 2930 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 32
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:30 am | |
| =I run over to the crash site=
I'm here Rubble.
=I tap him on the shoulder=
I tried raising command...We're completely on our own. | |
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
Posts : 13169 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:31 am | |
| =i turn around and nod= Yeah, that's just handy. Hey, help me check these guys.
=i go over to one of the Alpha squad members, Trident. He is out cold, and is not going to wake up soon= Oh, lovely. | |
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Valor The Newly Not New Guy
Posts : 217 Join date : 2011-08-16 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:31 am | |
| (Markov)
=I see Shroud over me, but I wasn't sure what he was saying= | |
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The Meta The Longterm Poster
Posts : 2930 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 32
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:33 am | |
| - Garth wrote:
- =i turn around and nod=
Yeah, that's just handy. Hey, help me check these guys.
=i go over to one of the Alpha squad members, Trident. He is out cold, and is not going to wake up soon= Oh, lovely. You got it Rubble. =I sling my rifle over my shoulder= Anyone that's up, please respond to this signal. | |
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Xazhi The Longterm Poster
Posts : 3243 Join date : 2011-06-03
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:39 am | |
| =He sends a text to his squad= - Code:
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The area seems secure. Awaiting orders. | |
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Skippy The Wizards
Posts : 4616 Join date : 2011-05-10
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:41 am | |
| Not me. Save it for someone else. Armour took all my impact but it's wrecked.. Somethings not right here Aegir. There's no way a rocket should have tore up that pelican like it did. | |
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N The Longterm Poster
Posts : 3589 Join date : 2011-05-13
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:43 am | |
| - Shelby wrote:
- Not me. Save it for someone else. Armour took all my impact but it's wrecked.. Somethings not right here Aegir. There's no way a rocket should have tore up that pelican like it did.
"I don't think that was a normal rocket. Are you sure your alright?" | |
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zeru The Wizards
Posts : 4926 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:43 am | |
| this is whsiper good but all weapons are gone | |
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Skippy The Wizards
Posts : 4616 Join date : 2011-05-10
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:46 am | |
| Seriously I'm fine. And I'm just saying. I think there was some kind of explosive packed into the engine. | |
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
Posts : 13169 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:48 am | |
| =i look around, not seeing anyone else who needs help. I comm Aegir= Sir, we got people who need your help.
=i go to the back of the Pelican and look around, noting the fog= What in the hell... | |
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N The Longterm Poster
Posts : 3589 Join date : 2011-05-13
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:49 am | |
| - Shelby wrote:
- Seriously I'm fine. And I'm just saying. I think there was some kind of explosive packed into the engine.
"What? it could've been done while you were gathering intel. That's my guess. I'm going to go be a medic for a change, stay frosty." I walk away, to check up on the others. I get a Comm from Rubble: - Quote :
- Sir, we got people who need your help.
"Roger that, on my way now." | |
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The Meta The Longterm Poster
Posts : 2930 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 32
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:51 am | |
| - Garth wrote:
- =i look around, not seeing anyone else who needs help. I comm Aegir=
Sir, we got people who need your help.
=i go to the back of the Pelican and look around, noting the fog= What in the hell... =I start seeing the fog popping up= Keep your eyes open everyone...this could get ugly =I check my USGPS and see it acting up= This is isn't going very well at all... | |
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Skippy The Wizards
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| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:52 am | |
| I go over and lean against the now smashed windshield of the pelican. The fog gets thick around me.
Everybody! Stick together, partner up, link arms and don't trust equipment or sound. This fog will throw them both off. | |
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N The Longterm Poster
Posts : 3589 Join date : 2011-05-13
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:53 am | |
| I walk to the end of the pelican.
"Who's up!?" I shout. | |
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
Posts : 13169 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:54 am | |
| =i turn to Hawk= Looks like we're budding, now.
=i hold out my hand= Care to walk me across the street, kind sir?
=i had put on my child-ish voice, to make a joke out of the impression that Spartans can't show fear. I reply to Aegir=
Hawk and Rubble are, sir! | |
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Draco The Wizards
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| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:55 am | |
| =I had fallen asleep against one of the walls of the Pelican=
Rest...
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The Meta The Longterm Poster
Posts : 2930 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 32
| Subject: Re: A "Rise" Story- The Start of Something New. 16/01/12, 03:57 am | |
| - Shelby wrote:
- I go over and lean against the now smashed windshield of the pelican. The fog gets thick around me.
Everybody! Stick together, partner up, link arms and don't trust equipment or sound. This fog will throw them both off. You don't say...Aye aye, ma'am. =Rubble comes and we link arms= =childishly= Sure will, Rubble. =I allow a grin cross my face= | |
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