Chapter 4: Exodus

Subject: Re: Chapter 4: Exodus 12/06/11, 06:51 am

Whatever it is. Just tell me. =i keep rubbing her back=

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(Zayne sighs)

Zayne-Fine if you want to be a depressed idiot, so be it.

(Zayne disappears)

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I turn back to him and begin kissing frantically

Subject: Re: Chapter 4: Exodus 12/06/11, 06:55 am

=i kiss back, i hold her close, my hands roaming again=

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I pull his hands away from areas

Subject: Re: Chapter 4: Exodus 12/06/11, 06:58 am

=i keep my hands locked in the small of her back, but my kisses continue with their heat and intensity=

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I kiss back, slowly moving downwards, starting with his neck. I then proceed to kiss his chest and continue downwards

Subject: Re: Chapter 4: Exodus 12/06/11, 07:04 am

=i let her continue, my hands locked. i momenrarily brace for pain as she nears a new wound, but no pain arrives. i start shifting, unconsciously=

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I carefully avoid his wound and continue working my way downwards until i reach my goal. My tongue teases him.

Subject: Re: Chapter 4: Exodus 12/06/11, 07:08 am

=i groan and shift beneath her, getting even more erect as she goes. i struggle to keep my hands locked behind her=

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My tongue stops teasing and i begin to use the rest of my mouth

Subject: Re: Chapter 4: Exodus 12/06/11, 07:12 am

=as she goes, more groans and moans escape me. i start moving with her. my back arches with pleasure=

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I pull away, not wanting to go to far and work my way back up to him

Subject: Re: Chapter 4: Exodus 12/06/11, 07:18 am

=my hands break free and go about their way. they explore just about everywhere of her, one goes lower again=

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I pull his hands away again and back off laughing

Subject: Re: Chapter 4: Exodus 12/06/11, 07:21 am

=i start laughing too= Hey, no fair! =i kiss her, long and hard= I didn't get my turn!

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I shake my head and back away more

Subject: Re: Chapter 4: Exodus 12/06/11, 07:23 am

=i let her back away, my heartbeat causing me to throb. Hey, biology. Don't blame me= That it? Or did you have something else planned?

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I shrug, and just stare at him

Subject: Re: Chapter 4: Exodus 12/06/11, 07:31 am

=i smile= Well, it's only fair...

=i pull her closer and start teasing her through her clothes with my tongue. i start at her neck and go down=

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I drop into a worried face but let him continue

Subject: Re: Chapter 4: Exodus 12/06/11, 07:37 am

=my hands start taking off her clothing. my tongue pauses for a second to whisper to her= It you want me to stop, just let me know.

=my tongue starts to explore again=

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I let him continue onwards, helping him with my clothes

Subject: Re: Chapter 4: Exodus 12/06/11, 07:41 am

=i go lower and lower, until i reach the point i want to be at. my tongue first teases, alongside my hand. my hand moves away and my tongue enters=

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My body shudders a little with the moisture but a small noise escapes from em again

Subject: Re: Chapter 4: Exodus 12/06/11, 07:45 am

=my tongue continues, getting faster then slower, then repeating itself. my fingers run lightly up and down her skin=

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I shudder again as another moan escapes from me.

Subject: Re: Chapter 4: Exodus 12/06/11, 07:50 am

=my tongue makes a few deep pushes, going deeper than usual. my hands continue lightly stroking her skin=

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I push him away quickly, stopping things where they are. I shake my head at him.

Subject: Re: Chapter 4: Exodus 12/06/11, 07:56 am

=i pull myself up to her. i kiss her, gently= Okay. How about we stop here for the night? Then we'll talk?

=i lie down, putting my arm around her waist=

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I sigh and lie with him

Guest

=Ash is still waiting at the vents for Jay or Draco to come back=
Where the hell are they..? Its been hours...

=She looks around the room again and leaves=
Maybe something happened..? I should get on the comms

=She walks back to her room=
Looks like he didn't come back here...

=She sighs and heads outside=
I need some air...

=She stands at the door watching the world go past, losing her self in her thoughts=

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(The sun begins to peek its head over the horizon)
(Its rays stating a new day)
(The light hits him as does the warmth)
(He is soaked to th bone from the rain)
(He is cold)
(He does not care, He does not care)
(He cannot feel, He cannot feel)
(His eyes close for the first time in hours, the glazed look depleting)

Subject: Re: Chapter 4: Exodus 12/06/11, 01:59 pm

(Mongoose loses traction again)*Goddammit! Piece of shit bike!*

(I get off the mongoose)

You were useful for a time...

(I walk through the mud and get inside the base)

Sonofabitch. Now I know why I hated the 'Goose...

(I find a wall and wait there, rain soaked and exhausted)

Subject: Re: Chapter 4: Exodus 12/06/11, 03:53 pm

=I wake up, and lie on my back, not wanting to disturb Jay by getting up. I stare at the ceiling and think= Since when do songs trigger dreams? Why won't Jay talk to me? What happened out in the forest?

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(He snaps out of it)
(He looks around confused)

What.

(He stands noticing how cold he is)

Jesus

(He walks back to the base)

Guest

=Ash still lost in her own mind forgets the time, she looks up at the sky=
Another storm brewing already..? This planet doesn't let up...

=She turns and walks inside=
I hope we can leave soon...

=She heads for the messhall=

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(He stops just outside the entrance to the base)
(Hyperthermia)
(He shakes to get warm)
(He staggers on)

Cold.
So cold.

(He walks into the messhall)
(He leans on a wall)
(Still shaking)

So cold.

Guest

=Sees Draco come in shaking=
Draco?! What happened?!

=She gets up and runs over to him=
Where have you been..?

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(He stutters)
@Ash
I........I dont........I dont know.

(He shakes even more)

Im.........cold.........
So.....cold

Guest

It's all right... I got you...

=She hugs him=
Lets get you to the medbay... Might be something to help you...

=She tries to take Draco to the medbay=
Dam... I need some help

=She turns on her comms=
Anyone there? I need help! Draco's in trouble

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@Ash
Just.........hold me.........

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David awakens from his nightmare to realize his comms-unit is still on, talking into it, "Urggh...What's wrong with Draco?" He holds his head in pain.

Guest

Draco... Stay with me, I'm here

=She hugs him trying to keep him warm=
It's fine David... I got him...

=She drops to the floor making sure she has him in her grip=

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David nods, "Acknowledged...Now I can focus on getting myself up." David staggers, but finally stands up, quickly grabbing a chair and sitting down, sighing.

Subject: Re: Chapter 4: Exodus 12/06/11, 06:33 pm

Quill wrote:: It's all right... I got you...

=She hugs him=
Lets get you to the medbay... Might be something to help you...

=She tries to take Draco to the medbay=
Dam... I need some help

=She turns on her comms=
Anyone there? I need help! Draco's in trouble

(I hear the comm)

That's not good

(I rush to find Ash)

I hope I can get to him in time...

(I hear David on the comm)

Lets hope David knows how to treat hypothermic shock

(I yell into the comms) Whatever you do, don't warm him up too rapidly. If you do, you'll just make it worse.

(I rush towards her position to hopefully help Draco out)

Guest

=She hugs Draco closer trying to keep him warm, she sees him turn pale=
Dam! I thought I had him...

=She pulls him up=
Draco? What do I do...? Draco?! Wake up..?

Subject: Re: Chapter 4: Exodus 12/06/11, 07:57 pm

Quill wrote:: =She hugs Draco closer trying to keep him warm, she sees him turn pale=
Dam! I thought I had him...

=She pulls him up=
Draco? What do I do...? Draco?! Wake up..?

(I spy Ash, with Draco on the floor)

Shit, shit, shit! Just what I thought.

(I look at Draco) (To Ash) This isn't good. He's going into shock and nothing can help him except slow warmth and plenty of rest.

(I look at Draco once more)Whatever you do, keep him as stable as possible.

(I comm David)(Urgent) David, get over here damnit! Draco just went into shock, and the medbay is a bit too far. We need assitance, now!

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=hears the commotion=

hammer that u if it's slow heat u need i have a portable heater nearby i can get it if u wish

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(His eyes open for a second)

@Ash
Im...........sorry........
..I love........you.

(His eyes close)

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