| Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 | |
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Draco The Wizards
Posts : 7916 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 08:29 pm | |
| (he looks deep into her eyes) @Ash O.k. lets go.
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 08:30 pm | |
| =All three of us walk Dormii to the cells and put him in one=
Me: You want us to lock it? |
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
Posts : 13169 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 08:31 pm | |
| Please, I don't think I can stop myself from leaving it I, well, go back.
If Jay wakes up, tell her what's happened, where I am.
=i sit and wait, trying not to worry= | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 08:34 pm | |
| =Closes and locks the door=
=Hands Zeru the key=
Me:=smiling= Well, looks like it is the other way around now..
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zeru The Wizards
Posts : 4926 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 08:37 pm | |
| will ash,jay and draco pelase come to the bridge it is urgent | |
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The Meta The Longterm Poster
Posts : 2930 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 32
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 08:41 pm | |
| - Anog wrote:
- =Closes and locks the door=
=Hands Zeru the key=
Me:=smiling= Well, looks like it is the other way around now..
(To Snow) Indeed it is. But don't let that go to your head, Snow (I look at Dormii) Poor guy, he has it much worse than I do. | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 08:41 pm | |
| =She loads her stuff onto a pelican and prepares to say goodbye= I hope he can forgive me... I wonder if Oni will understand..
=She turns around one last time= Don't you get hurt when I'm gone O'k? I will, miss you. |
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zeru The Wizards
Posts : 4926 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 08:44 pm | |
| - UnspoiledQuill wrote:
- =She loads her stuff onto a pelican and prepares to say goodbye=
I hope he can forgive me... I wonder if Oni will understand..
=She turns around one last time= Don't you get hurt when I'm gone O'k? I will, miss you. =in a hurry i have news u should here before u leave | |
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Draco The Wizards
Posts : 7916 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 08:45 pm | |
| (smiles) @Ash I will miss you too. (kisses her)
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 08:46 pm | |
| =She steps on board the Pelican= I promise Draco I will come find you...
=The doors close as the Pelican slowly leaves the ship= |
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zeru The Wizards
Posts : 4926 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 08:49 pm | |
| =to draco we need to talk | |
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Skippy The Wizards
Posts : 4616 Join date : 2011-05-10
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 08:50 pm | |
| I cough quietly in the darkness, afraid to move because of the burning pain in my side | |
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
Posts : 13169 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 08:52 pm | |
| =i don't remember what happened in that cell, that day. but I know this: a weight was lifted from me, and a hole was opened. i woke up crying, to this day i do not know why, but i can guess...=
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 08:52 pm | |
| =I walk past the room containing Jay, I see her rustling=
Me: Are you ok..? |
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Draco The Wizards
Posts : 7916 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 08:54 pm | |
| (He grabs her dog tags from his hardcase and places them around his neck) (he walks off) She doesnt get it does she. (smiles) It's not her being here with me that is hurting me. It is her being away from me. (he looks over at Zeru) @Zeru Alright | |
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zeru The Wizards
Posts : 4926 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 08:54 pm | |
| is about torre's body something's not right | |
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Skippy The Wizards
Posts : 4616 Join date : 2011-05-10
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 08:55 pm | |
| I hear a voice, faint. It sounds like a leaf, quietly rustling in the wind on a lone tree. I'm unable to respond and the pain takes a hold of me again and i feel myself grimace
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Draco The Wizards
Posts : 7916 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 08:57 pm | |
| @Zeru What do you mean "not right" | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 08:58 pm | |
| =I slowly walk into the room=
Me: You don't look so good.. you want some Morphine? |
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zeru The Wizards
Posts : 4926 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 08:59 pm | |
| [u} it's not torres it's a $%@ flash clone the morons at oni must think i'm stupid[/u] | |
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Skippy The Wizards
Posts : 4616 Join date : 2011-05-10
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 08:59 pm | |
| The voice is clearer this time and my mind can only think of one response.
Dor...mii
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Draco The Wizards
Posts : 7916 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 09:00 pm | |
| (he looks off, as if forgetting the current conversation) @Zeru You wanted me to go to the bridge right (heads off to the bridge) | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 09:03 pm | |
| =Confused, I take out a small needle of Morphine=
Me: You may feel some discomfort
=I push the needle into her leg and squeeze the package of Morphine= |
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Skippy The Wizards
Posts : 4616 Join date : 2011-05-10
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 09:04 pm | |
| My body rejects the strange substance now flowing through my veins and i cough it up | |
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
Posts : 13169 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 09:08 pm | |
| =i comm Snow and Zeru= Whenever either of you two are ready to try whatever it is, I'm ready.
=i stand and wipe the tears from my face. I face the door, standing like they taught me in training, legs shoulder length, hands behind my back. I think of Jay and how much she has helped me=
=to myself= I love you, Jay. I just hope that I stay the same when you wake up. | |
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zeru The Wizards
Posts : 4926 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 09:09 pm | |
| ok dormi meet me in the mde bay and we'll proceed | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 09:10 pm | |
| =Seeing the sudden coughing, I panick=
Me: Oh shit! maybe I should check your dog tags for allergies
=I pull up the jingling tags=
Me:=reading aloud= Allergies, Poppy.. Shit.. |
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Skippy The Wizards
Posts : 4616 Join date : 2011-05-10
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 09:11 pm | |
| I feel a slight pull at my neck and my arm instinctively reaches out and grabs the unfamiliar thing touching me | |
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Draco The Wizards
Posts : 7916 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 09:12 pm | |
| (As he is walking he hears coughing and yelling coming from Jay's room) (he arrives to a coughing Jay and a panicking Snow) (he grabs Snow and slams him against the wall) @Snow (calmly) What did you do to her | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 09:14 pm | |
| Me: =fastly speaking= I didn't do anything! I just gave her some Morphine, she looked in pain! |
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Draco The Wizards
Posts : 7916 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 09:15 pm | |
| (he sets him down easily) @Snow Ok. | |
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
Posts : 13169 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 09:15 pm | |
| =i open the door and begin walking to the Medbay. I wonder what might happen: "will I still love Jay? Will she still love me? Will I even SURVIVE?" all these thoughts run through my mind, as I enter the Medbay. I see Jay coughing and Draco pinning Snow against the wall. I pause for a second=
What the hell is happening? | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 09:16 pm | |
| =Hand gesturing to Jay=
Me:Uh oh, Unfortunately for me, I forgot to check the dog tag.. she apparently is allergic to Poppy.. Dormii, calm down, I was just trying to help
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Skippy The Wizards
Posts : 4616 Join date : 2011-05-10
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 09:17 pm | |
| My coughing worsens and im aware of voices around me, but unable to distinguish what they say | |
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
Posts : 13169 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 09:18 pm | |
| And so Draco pins you to a wall? Ok then....
=i hear Jay coughing, i run over to her= Hey, you still here? Cmon, it's me Dormii. I'm right here.
=i grab her hand in mine= | |
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Draco The Wizards
Posts : 7916 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 09:19 pm | |
| (looks over at Dormii) @Dormii just got here. thought he did something worse.
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 09:20 pm | |
| Me: Well, before that I walked in because she seemed uneasy. I gave her some Morphine. |
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Skippy The Wizards
Posts : 4616 Join date : 2011-05-10
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 09:20 pm | |
| My hand tightens on the object that has it and i give a violent shuddering cough finally | |
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
Posts : 13169 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 09:21 pm | |
| =i begin to panic= Jay? Jay! Cmon, stay here. I'm right here.
=i kiss her, trying to bring her back= | |
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Draco The Wizards
Posts : 7916 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 09:24 pm | |
| (within) Zayne-All of this noise. Let me extinguish it for you Draco-You are not going to lay a finger on these people Zayne-Technically it would be your finger. Just like that day Draco-Shut up! Zayne-Oh come on. who are people going to blame. something they cant see or something they can. Draco-I did not want that to happen Zayne-In yet it did (His eyes flicker from white to red) Zayne-Just let me do it Draco-No! (He runs out of the Medbay) | |
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Skippy The Wizards
Posts : 4616 Join date : 2011-05-10
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 09:25 pm | |
| I feel pressure on my hands, it's moist and warm. I withdraw my hand and realise my eyes were shut the entire time. | |
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zeru The Wizards
Posts : 4926 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 09:26 pm | |
| =hears the commotion and bolts in to medbay seeing jay coughing he rushes over i need everyone but dormi to leave now | |
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The Meta The Longterm Poster
Posts : 2930 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 32
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 09:26 pm | |
| (I walk into the medbay) (Shocked) Oh sh*t! (I panic) (Urgent) Anything I should do here? | |
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Skippy The Wizards
Posts : 4616 Join date : 2011-05-10
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 09:28 pm | |
| I open my eyes. The blackness fades and is replaced by pure white. It confuses me | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 09:30 pm | |
| =I put my back to the wall and slide down=
Me:=to myself= This isn't good..
=I rustle through my medical bag=
Me:=to myself= There has to be something in here...
=I stop, slowly pull up a cover needle=
Me: Use this.. |
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The Meta The Longterm Poster
Posts : 2930 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 32
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 09:32 pm | |
| - slummyzeru wrote:
- =hears the commotion and bolts in to medbay seeing jay coughing he rushes over i need everyone but dormi to leave now
(Hearing the urgency) Ok, got it. (I get out of the medbay) Anyone want to point out as to who or what caused the incident here? (I look at Snow's face) Oh, you make every corpsman I knew look like an idiot. | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 09:39 pm | |
| Me: I am not taking the blame if this needle doesn't work.. does anyone else want to do it..
=I nudge Dormii with the needle= |
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zeru The Wizards
Posts : 4926 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 09:40 pm | |
| =injects jay with an antidote after she stops coughing he turns to snow= why didn't u check the tags did u think spartans don't have them | |
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Skippy The Wizards
Posts : 4616 Join date : 2011-05-10
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 09:41 pm | |
| I cough and roll off the table onto the floor. I lie there on my front with my head in between my arms for a few seconds before trying to say something in a very out-of-breath manner.
Which... One.... of you.... idiots....just put.....Morphine....In me? | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 19/05/11, 09:42 pm | |
| =I take a step back with the tingling down my spine=
Me: It was... me.. |
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