Chapter 2: Judgement

Guest

=Ash smiles back=
Draco if only I could change what I have done, none if this needed to happen.

If I could show you how sorry I am....

The Wizards Posts : 7916 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 30

(looks into Ash's eyes)
Stop beating yourself up for that.

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Guest

I can't not after what happened to Torres and Jay! I betrayed them all and I should pay for it...
The worst thing is that I betrayed you.

The Wizards Posts : 4926 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 33

dang it no response can anyone else hear me

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Matt C. wrote:: "Oh sh-"

Reznov (My teammate) pulled out a M7S Submachine Gun, and fired into the air. "Knock him out." He said. I hit the politician over the head, he fell to the floor. Now the Casino was in chaos, with everyone running everywhere. "Run to the exit Collins!!" Run? While I'm carrying a body. Thanks Reznov. Thanks. I ran as fast as I could to the door. *Bang* "Flashbangs!!!."

I dropped the body. "You know what? F*** this." I grabbed my Automag, and put it up to the Politicians head. "COLLINS." I looked at the door. A squad of our men was there, with High-Powered Rifles. He motioned me over. I grabbed the man, and dragged him out the door....

As the Doctor enters his ship, he is greeted by an A.I
"welcome back Nikolaus, were you successful?"
"no, I wasn't, but that doesn't matter, we need to find fuel and leave, I think one of the Rebels that took the Politician found my Data Pad."
"sir, ,you really ought to be more careful"
"shut it sophia!"
the doctor goes to the Lab, and checks Data on one of his experiments.....

Guest

=Getting this man away from the seemingly rampaging monster was the only thought in my mind=

Me: Keep running, he is right behind us!

=I threw down my empty pistol and fired my DMR at the hulk, my shots were off because of my heavy breathing, heartbeat and running=

Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement 14/05/11, 09:02 pm

Anog wrote:: =Getting this man away from the seemingly rampaging monster was the only thought in my mind=

Me: Keep running, he is right behind us!

=I threw down my empty pistol and fired my DMR at the hulk, my shots were off because of my heavy breathing, heartbeat and running=

(Stop to see Anog)

(On anog's helme frequency) (comm) Hold on, I'll hold Torres, for what its worth...

(Looks at Torres's incoming body)(To Torres) Bring it...

Guest

=I turn around to see that the man had stopped=

Me: What are you doing!!

=He ignored me and I told everyone to stop and shoot at the attacking man=

Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement 14/05/11, 09:10 pm

slummyzeru wrote:: dang it no response can anyone else hear me

(On comm) Zeru, its Marcus. Torres isn't himself anymore. He won't know who you are. Most imortantly, we're fighting on his turf.

Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement 14/05/11, 09:13 pm

Anog wrote:: =I turn around to see that the man had stopped=

Me: What are you doing!!

=He ignored me and I told everyone to stop and shoot at the attacking man=

(Angry) I said Ill hold him off. just get out of here...

(looking) *damn* (Torres tackles him)

(hit hard) GAHHHH!

Guest

Me: Ok, lets go!!

Squadmate: We can't just leave him here, we would have came here for nothing!

=Thinking about the decision, I told everyone to follow me.=
=The whole platoon crouched behind snowhills and watched the outcome.=

Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement 14/05/11, 09:22 pm

BlackHammer wrote:

Anog wrote:: =I turn around to see that the man had stopped=

Me: What are you doing!!

=He ignored me and I told everyone to stop and shoot at the attacking man=

(Angry) I said Ill hold him off. just get out of here...

(looking) *damn* (Torres tackles him)

(hit hard) GAHHHH!

=as he pinns the man to the ground a storm slowly begins to arise and starts to making the scene hard to see. Torres gets off marcus and slips away into the snow ridden winds=

Guest

=As the figures disappear in the snowstorm a squad is sent to follow them and report the actions=

=obiously, that squad was mine=

=All 6 men hunkered down behind a frozen rock to see the fight ensue.=

Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement 14/05/11, 09:27 pm

GigaVortex wrote:

BlackHammer wrote:

Anog wrote:: =I turn around to see that the man had stopped=

Me: What are you doing!!

=He ignored me and I told everyone to stop and shoot at the attacking man=

(Angry) I said Ill hold him off. just get out of here...

(looking) *damn* (Torres tackles him)

(hit hard) GAHHHH!

=as Torres has marucs on the ground a storm slowly begins to arise. Torres gets off marcus and slips away into the snow ridden winds=

(coughing)*Uhhhhhhnn* I'm gonna die in the snow (last ditch message)(comm, weakly)Someone,*cough*,Anyone,*cough*, help*chough**cough*me.

(sees a man in the mist)(at Torres)Fight me face to face, no more of this stealth bs! Come on!

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"Ever since the project started, I've wondered if I had become a monster in the eyes of my team."-Warrant Officer Jack Micheals, S-150, GHOST-3

"All my life, I served with distinction, and became a war hero. Now I train those who will do that themselves."- MsSgt. Marcus Murand, ODST D.I.

"As a member of the Airborne's Jet Pack section, I was called crazy. As a Spartan-4, that hasn't really changed at all."- Mark Novak (Hawk), S-IV, Echo Squad

"If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps he hears a different drummer. Let him step to it, however measured or far away."--Henry David Thoreau

Guest

Squadmate: Should we listen to him?

Me: wait..

Squadmate: Come on! He is going to die!

Me: NO, STAY HERE, DAMNIT

=He didn't listen and ran out there guns blazing, I tried to grab his leg or collar but he was to fast=

=He got to the man and started to punch him as hard as he could=

Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement 14/05/11, 09:37 pm

Anog wrote:: Squadmate: Should we listen to him?

Me: wait..

Squadmate: Come on! He is going to die!

Me: NO, STAY HERE, DAMNIT

=He didn't listen and ran out there guns blazing, I tried to grab his leg or collar but he was to fast=

=He got to the man and started to punch him as hard as he could=

=all you hear is the faint screm as the fierce wind block out the soldiers screams= Weak. =behind Anog after a few second= So your the leader...say bye to your followers.

Guest

Son of a bitch..

Me: RUN, RUN, RUN

=I was so frightened that I forgot to turn on the comms, but my platoon could still hear me.. I hope=

Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement 14/05/11, 09:41 pm

GigaVortex wrote:

Anog wrote:: Squadmate: Should we listen to him?

Me: wait..

Squadmate: Come on! He is going to die!

Me: NO, STAY HERE, DAMNIT

=He didn't listen and ran out there guns blazing, I tried to grab his leg or collar but he was to fast=

=He got to the man and started to punch him as hard as he could=

=all you hear is the faint screm as the fierce wind block out the soldiers screams= Weak. =behind Anog after a few second= So your the leader...say bye to your followers.

(I charge and fly tackle Torres) Miss me big boy. Hope that leaves a mark.

(To soldier)Stay out of this. You don't, and you die
(charges Torres) Yeahhhhh!

Guest

=Having the whole platoon sprint away calling for Pelican extraction brought back memories of the Battle of Ariel, except there was more gunfire, more Aliens, and less rattling of armor on Ariel=

=I could hear the coming Pelican, but I couldn't see it=

Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement 14/05/11, 09:45 pm

Anog wrote:: Son of a bitch..

Me: RUN, RUN, RUN

=I was so frightened that I forgot to turn on the comms, but my platoon could still hear me.. I hope=

=sees Marcus running toward him and fires his MPU blasting him away= Hmm simpleton.
=as he watches the man run, he hears the men behind the rock and walks toward them=
(one soldier)*Hey did you guys hear that. It sounded like and order to run.*
(another soldier) *Think something might have hap...* =as the soldier speaks to his friend he sees a figure faintly in the wind, and then feels the horror as the a bright blade comes into view= (same soldier)*CONTACT CONTACT!!!.* =it was too late Torres had killed them with ease their screams just meshed with the screeches of the wind=

The Wizards Posts : 4926 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 33

=the pelican touching down is the one zeru is in, seeing the odst's he opens fire witn the chain gun of the pelican=

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Guest

=Seeing a Machine Gun open fire on what was left of the platoon, we all ran into the blizzard to find a safe place to hide=

Me: What is wrong with this F---ed up planet!!

Platoon Leader: Friendly Fire!! Get to a cave!!

=Hunkering down into a small cave to get away from the heated bullets, there was only about 23 people left in the platoon=

Squadmate: That isn't ours!!

Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement 14/05/11, 09:51 pm

GigaVortex wrote:

Anog wrote:: Son of a bitch..

Me: RUN, RUN, RUN

=I was so frightened that I forgot to turn on the comms, but my platoon could still hear me.. I hope=

=sees Marcus running toward him and fires his MPU blasting him away= Hmm simpleton.
=as he watches the man run, he hears the men behind the rock and walks toward them=
(one soldier)*Hey did you guys hear that. It sounded like and order to run.*
(another soldier) *Think something might have hap...* =as the soldier speaks to his friend he sees a figure faintly in the wind, and then feels the horror as the a bright blade comes into view= (same soldier)*CONTACT CONTACT!!!.* =it was too late Torres had killed them with ease their screams just meshed with the screeches of the wind=

(I get up slowly) (Weakly at first)Hey Torres, you forgetting someone?

(Tap my plates) I overhauled the suit's blast tolerance, so I'm just really f'd up. I also got something for you.

(lobs a couple frags)Catch this!

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Chapter 2: Judgement - Page 9 Run_10

"Ever since the project started, I've wondered if I had become a monster in the eyes of my team."-Warrant Officer Jack Micheals, S-150, GHOST-3

"All my life, I served with distinction, and became a war hero. Now I train those who will do that themselves."- MsSgt. Marcus Murand, ODST D.I.

"As a member of the Airborne's Jet Pack section, I was called crazy. As a Spartan-4, that hasn't really changed at all."- Mark Novak (Hawk), S-IV, Echo Squad

"If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps he hears a different drummer. Let him step to it, however measured or far away."--Henry David Thoreau

Guest

=I saw the outline of the pelican and having nothing but a few clips in the DMR which I had to save I took out a grenade=

=I pulled the pin and threw it as hard as I could, landed short.. I throw like a fucking girl..=

Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement 14/05/11, 09:53 pm

slummyzeru wrote:: =the pelican touching down is the one zeru is in, seeing the odst's he opens fire witn the chain gun of the pelican=

=hears Marcus but doesnt see the grenades= You wants some more. =grenades blow up around Torres and the blast hits Torres= What the hell?

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Chapter 2: Judgement - Page 9 Gigasi11

Did you think I was lying?
I said I’m evil, without even trying.
Drinking the red from your heart in one sitting.
You think you've got me pegged, you must be kidding.
I raise the dead up and they do my bidding.
Girl, I’m a thousand years old, I’m a riddle.
Bad little boy, yes, I’m bad, but not little.

Don't you know I'm a villain, every night I'm out killin'
sending everyone running like children
I know why you're mad at me, I got demon eyes
and they're looking right through your anatomy
Into your deepest fears, baby, I'm not from here
I'm from the Nightosphere
To me, you're clear, transparent
You got a thing for me girl, its apparent

Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement 14/05/11, 09:53 pm

=wakes up. groggily= Since when did the floor become squishy and compfortable? =looks down= Oh, it's a bed. =tries to get up= Oh, what the hell? Where'd my legs go? =looks at his legs= Okay, they're right there. Why won't they move? =a thought flashes through his mind= Oh, shit. Cmon, move dammit! Hey! Can somebody help me?

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Zimbabwe

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Oh Shit. Sorry Dormii, i didn't realise i was sat on your legs.

I get off the bed and crouch by your side

The feeling will come back soon, i'm so glad your awake.

Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement 14/05/11, 09:56 pm

=smiles at her= I'm glad I'm awake too. You ok?

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Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement 14/05/11, 09:57 pm

GigaVortex wrote:

slummyzeru wrote:: =the pelican touching down is the one zeru is in, seeing the odst's he opens fire witn the chain gun of the pelican=

=hears Marcus but doesnt see the grenades= You wants some more. =grenades blow up around Torres and the blast hits Torres= What the hell?

(With strength) I overhauled the armor. Y'like, Torres?

(Gets a couple more grenades and tosses them) Here's the second course!

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Chapter 2: Judgement - Page 9 Run_10

"Ever since the project started, I've wondered if I had become a monster in the eyes of my team."-Warrant Officer Jack Micheals, S-150, GHOST-3

"All my life, I served with distinction, and became a war hero. Now I train those who will do that themselves."- MsSgt. Marcus Murand, ODST D.I.

"As a member of the Airborne's Jet Pack section, I was called crazy. As a Spartan-4, that hasn't really changed at all."- Mark Novak (Hawk), S-IV, Echo Squad

"If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps he hears a different drummer. Let him step to it, however measured or far away."--Henry David Thoreau

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Hey flyboy, no worrying about me. Your the one who's worse off. My main concern is whether your okay or not.

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Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement 14/05/11, 09:59 pm

BlackHammer wrote:

GigaVortex wrote:

slummyzeru wrote:: =the pelican touching down is the one zeru is in, seeing the odst's he opens fire witn the chain gun of the pelican=

=hears Marcus but doesnt see the grenades= You wants some more. =grenades blow up around Torres and the blast hits Torres= What the hell?

(With strength) I overhauled the armor. Y'like, Torres?

(Gets a couple more grenades and tosses them) Here's the second course!

=sees the grenades this time and fires a pulse at them, while running at Marcus= I'll kill you. =punches Marcus in the gut=

Guest

Platoon Leader: =To "The Victory"= Send us either some reinforcements or a Pelican to get us the hell out of here!

=Not much was happening anymore besides small explosions in the distance=

Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement 14/05/11, 10:00 pm

=grunts= I'm fine. =tries sitting up= or not. I blacked out again didn't I? Did I hurt anyone?

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=has the pelican fire a barrage of missiles at the entrance of the cave=

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Pushes you back down

Stay there. And yes you did black out, you didn't even get near anyone if im honest.

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Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement 14/05/11, 10:03 pm

GigaVortex wrote:

BlackHammer wrote:

GigaVortex wrote:

slummyzeru wrote:: =the pelican touching down is the one zeru is in, seeing the odst's he opens fire witn the chain gun of the pelican=

=hears Marcus but doesnt see the grenades= You wants some more. =grenades blow up around Torres and the blast hits Torres= What the hell?

(With strength) I overhauled the armor. Y'like, Torres?

(Gets a couple more grenades and tosses them) Here's the second course!

=sees the grenades this time and fires a pulse at them, while running at Marcus= I'll kill you. =punches Marcus in the gut=

(darkly) Finally, now we're fighting on even terms (grabs and knees Torres in the gut)

I'll give you a fight. (right hooks Torres)

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Chapter 2: Judgement - Page 9 Run_10

"Ever since the project started, I've wondered if I had become a monster in the eyes of my team."-Warrant Officer Jack Micheals, S-150, GHOST-3

"All my life, I served with distinction, and became a war hero. Now I train those who will do that themselves."- MsSgt. Marcus Murand, ODST D.I.

"As a member of the Airborne's Jet Pack section, I was called crazy. As a Spartan-4, that hasn't really changed at all."- Mark Novak (Hawk), S-IV, Echo Squad

"If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps he hears a different drummer. Let him step to it, however measured or far away."--Henry David Thoreau

Guest

=Two pelicans landed just outside our cave and we piled in=

Me: Get us off this god damn planet!

=Just then the cave well.. caved in and the pelicans flew off back to "The Victory"=
<------ My face when that happened

Me: Pelican come in!!

=Nothing but static and the white noise was heard=

Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement 14/05/11, 10:05 pm

=grunts= Ow, flashback? I thought I left all that behind.

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Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement 14/05/11, 10:05 pm

BlackHammer wrote:

GigaVortex wrote:

BlackHammer wrote:

GigaVortex wrote:

slummyzeru wrote:: =the pelican touching down is the one zeru is in, seeing the odst's he opens fire witn the chain gun of the pelican=

=hears Marcus but doesnt see the grenades= You wants some more. =grenades blow up around Torres and the blast hits Torres= What the hell?

(With strength) I overhauled the armor. Y'like, Torres?

(Gets a couple more grenades and tosses them) Here's the second course!

=sees the grenades this time and fires a pulse at them, while running at Marcus= I'll kill you. =punches Marcus in the gut=

(darkly) Finally, now we're fighting on even terms (grabs and knees Torres in the gut)

I'll give you a fight. (right hooks Torres)

=spins to dodge the hook then puts his leg behind marcus's to trip him=

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Chapter 2: Judgement - Page 9 Gigasi11

Did you think I was lying?
I said I’m evil, without even trying.
Drinking the red from your heart in one sitting.
You think you've got me pegged, you must be kidding.
I raise the dead up and they do my bidding.
Girl, I’m a thousand years old, I’m a riddle.
Bad little boy, yes, I’m bad, but not little.

Don't you know I'm a villain, every night I'm out killin'
sending everyone running like children
I know why you're mad at me, I got demon eyes
and they're looking right through your anatomy
Into your deepest fears, baby, I'm not from here
I'm from the Nightosphere
To me, you're clear, transparent
You got a thing for me girl, its apparent

The Wizards Posts : 4616 Join date : 2011-05-10

Hmm. Obviously not. Are you hungry?

Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement 14/05/11, 10:07 pm

=stomach grumbles= Umm, yea I guess so. But first...

=stands up and kisses her=

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Zimbabwe

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Pulls away

Food first.

Guest

=A couple of men tried to clear the rubble away, there was only a little light coming through and I could see the enemy pelican=

Me: Give me your Sniper

=Someone handed me a Sniper=

Me: this is where hunting skills come in handy

=I fired one shot at the pelican, a big spark occured. I zoomed in with some binoculars and saw that I one of the chain guns barrels, splitting it in two=

Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement 14/05/11, 10:10 pm

GigaVortex wrote:

BlackHammer wrote:

GigaVortex wrote:

BlackHammer wrote:

GigaVortex wrote:

slummyzeru wrote:: =the pelican touching down is the one zeru is in, seeing the odst's he opens fire witn the chain gun of the pelican=

=hears Marcus but doesnt see the grenades= You wants some more. =grenades blow up around Torres and the blast hits Torres= What the hell?

(With strength) I overhauled the armor. Y'like, Torres?

(Gets a couple more grenades and tosses them) Here's the second course!

=sees the grenades this time and fires a pulse at them, while running at Marcus= I'll kill you. =punches Marcus in the gut=

(darkly) Finally, now we're fighting on even terms (grabs and knees Torres in the gut)

I'll give you a fight. (right hooks Torres)

=spins to dodge the hook then puts his leg behind marcus's to trip him=

(in the snow) Damn it. (grabs Torres's leg as I fall)

Its on now.

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Chapter 2: Judgement - Page 9 Run_10

"Ever since the project started, I've wondered if I had become a monster in the eyes of my team."-Warrant Officer Jack Micheals, S-150, GHOST-3

"All my life, I served with distinction, and became a war hero. Now I train those who will do that themselves."- MsSgt. Marcus Murand, ODST D.I.

"As a member of the Airborne's Jet Pack section, I was called crazy. As a Spartan-4, that hasn't really changed at all."- Mark Novak (Hawk), S-IV, Echo Squad

"If a man does not keep pace with his companions, perhaps he hears a different drummer. Let him step to it, however measured or far away."--Henry David Thoreau

Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement 14/05/11, 10:11 pm

=bows= Lead the way, m'lady.

=mumbling song= All I want is a little of the good life. All I need 's to have a good time.

=notices blood on my hands= Well, that's not a good sign. =wipes the blood off on my leg armor=

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Grabs your hand and pulls you off to the canteen where i sit you down and begin to make some food

We are not eating Zeru's stew!!

The Wizards Posts : 4926 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 33

= a recorded message plays on a device left beside dormii's i figured when u woke up u guys'd be hungry so i took the liberty of making some delicious beef stew it should still be hot enjoy

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Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement 14/05/11, 10:14 pm

=hears the message= Oh, well then.

=to Jay= Ok, seriously, what happened? I remember getting shot, then carrying you onto the Falcon. What happened in between? Cause I'm pretty sure one does not go from flat on their back to carrying people instantly.

=checks armor= And why is my back all burned?

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Zimbabwe

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I don't fully know if im honest. I was sorta out of it myself thanks to the whole 'being shot' thing

I turn and grin at you before placing a bowl of soup in front of you.

Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement 14/05/11, 10:20 pm

=raises eyebrows= and this is.....? Don't get me wrong, it smells amazing, I'm just curious.

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