| Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 | |
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| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 07:17 pm | |
| =Ash pushes past Dormii and steps in, all Dormii can hear is scratching= |
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
Posts : 13169 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 07:18 pm | |
| =i walk in, carefully= Ash? Ash, you okay? Where are you?
What the hell is that scratching sound? | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 07:20 pm | |
| =She laughs= I'm still burning not done need more! |
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
Posts : 13169 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 07:22 pm | |
| =i find the light switch and turn it on. my eyes are greeted wit the sight of TORRES! written on the walls as well as blood. Ash is trying to write more= Ash.....Ash, stop!
=i go and try to pull her away from the wall= | |
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| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 07:24 pm | |
| =She fights Dormii= Get off me! I need to stop it, I need to be free!
=She tires to crawl back to the wall= |
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
Posts : 13169 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 07:28 pm | |
| =i hold her back= Ash, stop! Whatever you think happened is not your fault! Stop trying to hurt yourself because of it! | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 07:31 pm | |
| =She kicks Dormii= Your killing me! I'm going to burn alive I need to get it out... the name is calling me I have to stop it.. |
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
Posts : 13169 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 07:32 pm | |
| =i pin her to the ground= Ash, tell me! What is calling you?! What name?! Say it and I can help you! | |
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| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 07:34 pm | |
| =She tries fighting Dormii= Get off me I'm burning! I need to go back Torres wants me to save him! I need the fire to stop! |
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
Posts : 13169 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 07:36 pm | |
| Torres is dead! You cannot change that!
What are you trying to do?! | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 07:38 pm | |
| He's burning my skin I need to stop it. He needs me I want to help him.
=Her eyes tear up= It hurts Its killing me! |
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
Posts : 13169 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 07:41 pm | |
| What hurts?! What is killing you?! Shame?! Fear?! What?! Tell me everything that is hurting you! | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 07:43 pm | |
| =She screams= Its Burning me the fire! I'm dying! The fire its got us we can't run! Quick the doors! No no no no! Their locked we cant get out its burning us all! |
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
Posts : 13169 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 07:45 pm | |
| There is no fire, Ash! There is nobody here, but us! What. Is. Hurting. You?! | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 08:00 pm | |
| What do we do!?? No we cant! I Have to I...
=She screams as if her soul is being torn away from her.= NO! Not again the screams! It burns! I cant my hands!
=She sobs to herself= |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 08:10 pm | |
| =I grab my helmet as if it were my head=
Me: Not again..
=I stand up and look at Juli unconsious=
Me: Look what you got me into.. again.. |
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Tenébrís Apprentice Story teller
Posts : 519 Join date : 2011-05-10
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 08:17 pm | |
| I wake up on my bed back at base. I walk outside, the base alive like usual. I look at my leg, all patched up. | |
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Draco The Wizards
Posts : 7916 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 08:21 pm | |
| (he wakes up after some rest) (He sits up still groggy) (For some reason he can hear Ash screaming) Ash (He follows the screams) (He finds where she and Dormii are) Ash, what is happening (He looks over to Dormii) Dormii. Did you. break your promise........... | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 08:24 pm | |
| "got you into? your the one that shot the gun." i mumble to Snow on the ground, ive been consious for awile now but i just layed on the ground cause there was no bed anymore, and Snow was sitting on me |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 08:26 pm | |
| Me: I fired the gun in the air to get you to stop fighting, but it had a silencer on it..
=I stand up=
Me: I could have just left you here to die, I could be on The Victory taking a little cat nap but I decided to come for you. |
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zeru The Wizards
Posts : 4926 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 08:28 pm | |
| tsk tsk tsk i let u keep ur little blade and then u go and do this where are your manners miss | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 08:32 pm | |
| "well that not nice, considering my escape plan included getting you off of this ship too. why didnt you shoot him in the leg or something, arent you a sniper?" i say to snow
(brb guys i got a call from work) |
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
Posts : 13169 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 08:33 pm | |
| =i look at Draco= I have not.
=to Ash= WHAT! IS! HAUNTING! YOU?! If you do not let it out, it comes out, when you least want it to! It shows itself when you are with your loved ones! When you are with your friends! When you are alone! And it BUILDS! It gains in power as it hides! Do not hide it!
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| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 08:35 pm | |
| Me: Ok, ok, fighting isn't going to get us anywhere.. we have to think of a new plan..
=Sits down in the far corner of the cell= |
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Draco The Wizards
Posts : 7916 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 08:36 pm | |
| (He pushes Dormii off of her) (He falls down to Ash) (Holding her) @Ash It's okay. Your grief, guilt has manifested itself. It is not your fault for what happened to him.
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 08:37 pm | |
| =Ash screams with laughter= Its burning us all! I cant stop it!
=Ash tries to crawl back to the wall=
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
Posts : 13169 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 08:39 pm | |
| =i pin her again= Is that what is haunting you? Torres' death?
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zeru The Wizards
Posts : 4926 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 08:39 pm | |
| - Anog wrote:
- Me: Ok, ok, fighting isn't going to get us anywhere.. we have to think of a new plan..
=Sits down in the far corner of the cell= =taps on the door= hello how are today snow | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 08:42 pm | |
| =She tries to push Dormii away= I can't breath my lungs are burning! my hands! |
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Draco The Wizards
Posts : 7916 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 08:43 pm | |
| @Dormii Get off of her.
@Ash It's okay. I'm here. | |
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
Posts : 13169 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 08:46 pm | |
| =i stand up= Ash, I know what you are going through. You need to release it before it grows too powerful. Otherwise it will, it will, control your life. It will show up when you sleep, when you eat, when you fight, esspecially when you fight.
You have to release it. | |
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| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 08:47 pm | |
| =She tries to fight Draco off= I can't! The fire its got the team, the doors are locked we cant get out! |
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Draco The Wizards
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| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 08:48 pm | |
| (He holds onto Ash) (He grabs her hand and holds it) @Ash Tell me. Tell me that. It is not just Torres there is something else. Tell me. | |
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
Posts : 13169 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 08:49 pm | |
| Not another one. Not another one like me... | |
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| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 08:52 pm | |
| =She cry's= They can't get out there's no time I'm trying but I cant, I cant I... I...
=Ash screams again push Draco away= I'm on fire I can't get to them its to late! My hands! |
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Draco The Wizards
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| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 08:53 pm | |
| (he scrambles back to her) @Ash Release. Tell me. (Within) Zayne(laughing)-She is as crazy as you are Draco-No Zayne-Release me. I want to play. Draco-Back away. Do not even think about it Zayne-too late
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
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| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 08:54 pm | |
| =i close the door to the room= | |
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| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 08:55 pm | |
| =She screams at him= Get back there's no way out I had to, I had to do it...
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
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| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 08:57 pm | |
| No one here is judging you, Ashlie Cole. We simply want to know what happened so we can help you.
Tell us. | |
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Draco The Wizards
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| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 08:59 pm | |
| (He takes the scream) (He looks at Ash, she can see he is about to lose control) @Ash Please, Ashlie.
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| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 09:02 pm | |
| =Ash crawls up in the corner= I can't there was nothing more I could do! They didn't stop not after... then the smell, it was the worst
=Ash looks away from everyone= I tired to help they but...
=She goes quite= I can't... |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 09:03 pm | |
| =As I start thinking about home, I begin to hum some of the songs that were sang in the country.=
=I see Zeru walk in=
Me: Hi Zeru, how are you the fine afternoon? Just humming some songs
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Draco The Wizards
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| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 09:04 pm | |
| (He stands trying to fight Zayne off) @Ash Please. Tell us. You have kept it bottled inside of you. Release. (His eyes go dark) (He tries to fight Zayne off)
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
Posts : 13169 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 09:04 pm | |
| =to Ash=You CAN! You must! Otherwise it will get worse. Believe me, it will get worse. Much worse. Let it go before it grows too powerful.
=i ask, very clearly and precisely= Do you want to be like me?
=i see Draco's eyes change= Oh, hell... =i brace to fight him off= | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 09:06 pm | |
| =She doesn't say anything she just looks into nothingness= No.. Not again I can't |
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Draco The Wizards
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| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 09:08 pm | |
| (Within) Draco-I am not going to let you. Not in front of her. Not now. Zayne-I WANT TO PLAY! Draco-I do not care
(He looks over at Dormii, before he turns) @Dormii Run, take her and Run. | |
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
Posts : 13169 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 09:10 pm | |
| =i grab Ash and take her out of the room=
=to Ash= Remember when you found me in my quarters, crying about "her"? Imagine fighting that off for days at a time. For weeks. Don't wait like I did, release it.
Please, don't end up like me. Don't end up like Draco, fighting off his demon forever.
You have to tell us. | |
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Draco The Wizards
Posts : 7916 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 30
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 09:12 pm | |
| (He can't fight him anymore) (Zayne runs up to the dorr just as it closes and locks) (He bangs on the door) Zayne-Come on. (He whistles) Zayne-I just want to play (He bangs on it harder) Zayne-LET ME OUT! | |
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Teria The Oldest Crones Alive
Posts : 13169 Join date : 2011-05-10 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 09:13 pm | |
| =to Ash= Don't turn into that. If you hide it for too long, it begins to control you. Let. It. Out. | |
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Draco The Wizards
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| Subject: Re: Chapter 2: Judgement part 2 17/05/11, 09:14 pm | |
| (Screaming) Zayne-I WANT OUT, LET ME OUT! (He begins to punch the door)
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